Thursday, 26 July 2012

We were there….tasting raindrops!




We went to our very own promenade, for no real reason at all;
But before the fire could ignite, the rain began to fall.
We could have left instantly, while I insisted you to stay in the rain;
Such tight got the interlock of ten fingers, that both couldn’t refrain.

Seeing in your eyes, I saw myself falling in love with you;
You said “I love you”, and in my mind I said it too.
That moment when I looked at you, your eyes gave me a sigh;
At the most cutest gaze, as I wondered, why?

Those young feelings within, could never be counted;
Reticence or restraint, by then, had all got surmounted.
That’s when our eyes began talking about all of this;
Every taste of our souls then topped with a kiss.

Then, facing the sea, we held each other on that one special rock,
In my heart is now safe, that passionate lip lock.
Those young feelings I tasted, seemed worth every second of bliss
So whenever I reminisce such moments, I think of my raindrop kiss.


This poem is special to me and will remain very close to my heart.
Love,
Maya



6 comments:

  1. Admirable and beautifully ravishing. Touched many a chord.

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  2. This definitely helps!
    Gratitude :)

    Regards,
    Maya

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  3. like a flower that blooms to wither, but each broken withered line, still holds the memory of the bloom that it once was.

    poignant.

    cheers.

    cyril

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    1. Thank you Cyril :)
      Beautiful lines from you too.
      Gratitude to you and my muse.

      Regards,
      Maya

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  4. Gosh..it made me feel nostalgic..keep writing,,stay blessed..

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    1. You made me smile :) Gratitude.

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